Is this story below good , interesting, grade level and are there any mistakes?

This is a very nice short story! The little poetic riddle is very nice. I don't know what grade you are in, so I am going to ume the writing is about right for your cl. The story needs some more proofreading, especially with regard to sentence structure, grammar (particularly subject-verb agreement) and punctuation. I suggest having someone else proofread it, too, because it is too familiar to you. Don't use abbreviations, such as "the three ft. tall blacksmith". A good job of proofreading could improve your grade by a couple of points. Good luck, and keep writing!